RE-SUB Changes

For my final front cover, contents page and double page spread I was told to edit the following:



Front Cover:
Move the cell lines to the edge of the page
Move the masthead more to the top left
(Possibly) remove the two images at either side of the central one

Contents Page:
Fill the unnecessary gap at the bottom

DPS:
Include page numbers


Evaluation:
Include more detail, analysis and terminology for each of the 7 questions.

So that the changes can be seen clearly, I will be posting my original three products below:

And here are the altered versions with the suggested changes:

For my front cover I altered the position of the masthead and moved all of the subheadings closer the outer regions of the page.

For my contents page the only thing I was told to do was fill the gap at the bottom, which I did by enlarging the text and moving my name and signature to the right to fill the space.

For my double page spread, unfortunately I didn't have the original photoshop file so I wasn't able to alter the size of the photo on the left to fill the gap like I originally planned, so I was forced to resorting to making just one change-adding page numbers. I used the same font in as what I used for the Risen logo to keep continuity. 

As for the suggestion of fleshing out my evaluation questions more thoroughly, for question 7 I further described how my college magazine didn't match up to my final three products in terms of technical proficiency and use of editing software (all additions to questions will be in the form of more detailed explanations at the bottom of each page. For question 6 I discussed further how Photoshop can be used as a method of creation. For question 5 I talked about how I used and broke conventions to attract a niche audience, and in the 4th question I